Term 2 writing : recount

Mrs Wilburn can I tell you something well, one day  my  mum , dad and brother and sister and uncle and Aunty  were  at my grandpas house and they heard somebody  calling  HELP!. It was my  grandpa . They  all  rushed into his  room.  He  took a last breath. Hle  was  dying. I  didn't know because I was at a slumber party with  Sophie.  When I come back  I asked mum where is gg and wilbur. She said they are all at snows. That is what we called  grandpa.  Anyway mum said snow died last night I burst  out with tears. I was so sad. Snow was the best. On Wednesday it was his funeral.  I  said a speech. It was  we will remember him we will  remember.